It is a large room that comes out of the side but barely gets any sunlight and heat. I like my comfy bedroom because it is very unique to me and what I like. The layout of the room has a facing direction pointing at the north east with side on single beds one near the huge closets and one across near the sliding windows for the sun to enter. What a great description of your beautiful bedroom! Wispy, rancid, airy, musty, stale, fresh, putrid, faint, light, floral, and acrid are all adjectives that could pertain to smell. So I think that I don't really have a style because it just a bit of everything some old stuff and some new stuff. Now you can go to your room and make it the way you want it and design it the way you like it. Its small and cluttered, so there's no where to move. The background color of my wall is light sea blue. In my room I also have a painting the my Aunty drew for me, It is a huge field of wheat with huts in them but no people from what you can see. Great descriptive writing Christopher, you went deep into a lot of detail about your living space and colours. The sun shines through my room during the day and makes my room look light. On it there are two pictures both a light green in background with pink and yellow tulips. It may be the view of the mountain you see out my window or maybe the blue colour scheme or maybe even all the photographs on my crisp white walls. Curtains and carpet are the same grey colour, but the carpet is so soft you could sleep on it. Clothes stuffed half in and half hanging out of the draws. Sometimes in the mornings it can be really cold but when that heat pump goes on it makes it better. Im proud to call the bedroom mine but im going to change it sometime in the future. For self fun and study. Thank you so much for cleaning it this weekend Colt!!! Also you repeat a lot of your facts over and over again, making this writing boring to read as I am just reading the same writing again and again. Although there are many flaws in my room, Im still tolerating them. Opposite the set of drawers is my build in wardrobe with my blue and red triangle patterned shelves.Also right in front of you as you walk in there is my big white window which is the main source of light. He is a untidy Australian Barraband and he is loud with a weird sense of humor some how. Overall I am hoping my parents will be convinced that my room needs a change like some new sheets on my bed, some colour on the wall and to get rid of that useless desk. All I can hear is my brothers music playing really loud and the sound of my dad telling me to clean my room. The size of my bedroom is the smallest out of the rest of my families rooms, but I can still fit in everything I need into it. When I walk into my room I feel alone and relaxed. I have small colorful dots (pink,green,yellow,blue), turquoise blue love hearts and my name stuck to my shiny white wardrobe. My bed has a wooden bed frame that comes up tall where my head is and not so tall where my feet are. This was both literal and metaphorical in the movie Shrek where the ogre Shrek lived in a swamp. The carpet is a dark brown colour that is nice and soft. But one thing that does make it dirty is my bird Percy, he leaves his seeds all over the floor and makes it the messiest. My bedroom. Usually when I have to make space/ tidy my room I put stuff in the wrong place. Your vocab was well done and I was able to visualize. 2 long pillows sit on top of my bed behind a small, dark square pillow. They make their stories real by allowing us to experience Where has it gone, well if you moved any of the clothes you'd see it because most of the time my humongous pile of absolute junk makes the floor camouflage like it's ready to go out hunting.The mess,I swear it's never ending. I also have bright dots that include the colours of light and bright pink, a turquoise dark and light and yellow. I stroll into my room and the bright colours instantly pop out. People who love the outdoors might feel most at ease and happy when theyre outside in the forest. But the spelling and use of punctuation was needed and also you could use some more descriptive words. All of my decorations are placed to make my room look even better. You have described some things though. If you open the window the fresh air wafts in. Writers usually describe the setting at the very start of a story. I think Emma used lots of punctuation and i liked haw she told us exactly were her room was. My bedroom is somewhere that I regularly spend time. My room has a fresh air smell and, in the morning you can hear the birds chirping outside, if you were to walk into my room it would be clean and tidy just the way I like it. The box has a wind up handle on the back which plays a gentle, musical melody. Down one side of it there are five drawers also filled with special items and on the bottom there is another drawer which is filled with gemstones. Mollys Bedroom The accessories in my room are mainly either the same as or matching the colour scheme in my room. Personally I love my Right in front of you as you walk in is my blue patterned desk with my small, white basketball hoop hanging above. This is to say that one person (your mother, father, wife, husband) is the person who makes you feel most comfortable and relaxed. The story behind this is that ogres are usually thought of as being dirty, smelly, and unkept. So I would like to describe to you my own little world. I have an adorable tiger painting above my bed. It is a king single and it has a wooden front and back board. On the opposite wall to my bed, lives my sisters king single bed with a black storage stool (that she doesn't use). It has the swirls because it gives the texture a bit more kick when you look at it and because my gran & Gran dad liked it that way. It is made of pine so is a rather light golden brown in colour. The best part of my room is the furniture and layout. Also some of you words are slept wrong or used in the wrong context. It has a dark theme and it has black sheets and gray covers. in order to create the perfect metaphor to describe your home. My bedroom is down the hallway of our house on your left. It is a square shape and it is warm. Because if you dont and try wade through all the clothes spread out and risk breaking your leg or ankle on toy cars or getting bits of lego stuck between your toes. If were in a restless, jumpy and excited mood, then we may as well have OCD, because everything will be perfect. Accessories in my room are very special to me. Brooke, I like the way you used your vocabulary skills. Well described - good use of descriptive words. Sometimes you cant hear anything because Im sleeping or the sound on my ipod is turned off. Then where you enter my bedroom behind the door there is my Hockey gear, Swimming bag and my School bag. I love my bed to bits (literally my cats rip it to pieces) You walk into my room and pop! What is self fun? it has a touch of my personality, and stays clean most of the time. Now you should have a pretty good idea of what my bedroom looks like. Nishmat Kol Chai In Russian, Inspirational messages can be viewed on plaques, saying things such as dream, see beauty in everything, or friends are the family we choose for ourselves. The word believe is arched across the door to my wardrobe. I love the vibrant colours and all my family photos stuck on my wardrobe and how much room I have to store clothes etc. My bedroom is special to me because it's where I can go to get alone time and just relax it's pretty smelly but it's a cozy warm layout that is just for me. I do everything in my room, im pretty much always in there. MY BEDROOM This situation becomes extra annoying in the afternoon, where the sun is falling down to the horizon, which makes is way too bright when Im sitting at my desk and doing homework. To your left is a white table for doing homework on. What is the time signature of the song Atin Cu Pung Singsing? My bedside table is black with sticker brands covering them. I would give you a rubric 5. 4-. I think my bedroom is perfect my way because of the colors, layout and the design. Hannahs Bedroom On the left hand side is a bunk bed which has Jacksons (my little brother) bed at the bottom and my bed at the top with really messy covers. Next to them I have tall, white draws bulging with clothes. Metaphors are used by many people to help convey a more abstract concept. There is also a bit a sporty feel because of all the sports gear. But there are a few errors like no enters between your intro and first point. Not quite how I see your room - it is a typical boys bedroom with a LOT of mess on the floor and you also forgot to say that you chuck stuff under your bed as well as the "random drawers"! Although I dont really like the blue on my walls and the colour of my floor so itd be good if that could have a change. Bridget did omit to describe how tidy she and her sisters fail to keep the room which adds to the overall impression that the space is more crowded than it actually is. I have a couple of lamps hidden around the room so when its dark it makes this cool effect. I'm not saying my bedroom is small it's just not big enough for all my bits and bobs. My room has many accessories, there is pictures, paintings, plants and other things too. But I enjoyed reading this but you keep spelling "color" the wrong way it's "colour.". The size of my bed is a king single. My bed side table is black but my desk is wooden so is are my draws. The first and the best part about my room is the layout. But sometimes it doesn't stay clean. 5, Can you use tactical language only to describe your bed. Room Metaphors and Similes Warmth of a Smile (Simile) Jack likes listening to different My pillow is softer than a cloud and feels like a giant marshmallow. Great writing Shadyn really liked it, I still ant that ps4 of yours though! My bedroom isnt so great. I would like my room to be neater and tidyer so my mother would not be nagging at me all the time saying pick up your clothes Bree or make your bed Bree. The layout of my room is your everyday large square room allowing a big area to dot items around, such as a bright white, built in wardrobe, a comforting king single or the small baby blue couch. No faults with your spelling. There are ups and downs but it is where I feel safe and calm. You used the right punctuation in the right places and I didn't see any mistakes. Which I have owned for a year now but it is really loud. My bed with its wooden stand is quite tall but I dont mind it that way. I like the fact that all your ideas were relevant and made sense to the topic. Don't forget punctuation. Running down the old wooden corridor a floorboard squeaked underneath my pounding feet. Good peace of writing. Brown that stands out because of the shine. I didn't notice any capital mistakes throughout your writing. I like black and white because it doesn't make the room feel too bright and the way it is placed and I like it that way. But you did miss out a few commas. you also need to indent your paragraphs. Big books and small books. Don't fix up anything that's awesome. My desk is white with a long blue draw that matches my blue wall. I have a blue stegosaurus lampshade, a monitor and PS4, a TV and even a bulletin board. On your left will be a built in cupboard for my clothes and other things. The best metaphors come from the heart. Above my bed there are another three picture that my mum had embroidered for us when we were little. There is also a small book case under the window it is red, green and blue Ive had it since I was little. To the right of my bed is my set of wood stained brown patterned drawers with my guitar up against them. You used capital letters in the right places and a few different types of punctuation. Well in my bedroom I have blue and white walls. I like my room because of the rugged and unique feel it gives off and all the furniture and accessories. Needs work on the punctuation. My walls are light blue and my ceiling is white. There are lots of accessories in the room. I have two soft pillows filled with feathers and two cotton filled ones. This is placed flush against the left hand wall and is filled with many treasures. You can see my chook shed and the house paddock with a woolshed at the back of it. There are photos of my family and a painting that I did myself. Above my desk there is my mini basketball hoop with my mini basketball in it. I would also change the view. You described your bedroom very well, but I feel your punctuation let you down a bit. When in my room, its as though you are separated from the rest of the house, because it is much more colourful and decorative. Last updated: April 25 2022. Even though it's small and crammed together and not that tidy it all adds to the style and the feel of the room. Style , layout , accessories and furniture are the 4 best qualities about my bedroom because that's what makes it mine. Good work I don't think you need to improve. But you could be a bit more tidier. Sometimes a little bit of exaggeration creates the best metaphors. One window is high on the wall with a rectangular shape the other window is more centered on the wall and is a square. Luckily for me I dont have much to tidy, unlike my brother. Stinky socks, crumpled papers and forgotten towels. Its a blue 3 person couch with blue, red, and green lines all [around the couch and it unfolds into a king size bed when unfolded. But thankfully, I dont have to suffer these flaws much longer, because in the holidays, Ill be moving rooms and Ill have the smallest but sunniest room in the house. Also my carpet is brown. I like how you used a lot of description! great work i love that you did good punctuation and it was a good story. Required fields are marked *. My bed is in the corner of my room and is out of the way so you don't have to walk around it. I think that your ideas are great, they describe your room well. must suck cock. My bed is quite low to the ground. But over all, I like my room. Great bedroom description Shadyn, I loved how you punctuated your sentences and it made it easy to read, you also have a good use of grammar. So I think that my bedroom is good because it is big and warm and I like how it is big enough to fit like 6 or more double beds in it so I can have a lot of friends round. Feed-forward - I can't think of anything bad about this (For this category at least) great job! Now what it looks like so I have a blue carpet and cream colored walls and a rug in the corner of my room. The colour and brightness are perfect in mostly every way possible. Old messy modern and not cared about is the first and foremost idea of the room. A medium size room down the end of a long hallway. The reason why it is so special to me is that my mothers friend gave it to me from Australia. On my right hand side wall as you walk in there are my bright football posters, my flag poster and my Crusaders flag. I cant find much bad things about your description writing. The most recurring feature would be its lovely and soft texture which you could possibly just lie on forever. Yes it can be very messy and there are times I cannot stand that mess any more so I tidy it. There isnt tonnes of furniture in my bedroom but I make it work with the room I have, I had the idea of a cabin bed so that i can fit some stuff under it rather than having it crammed up somewhere else. The reader doesn't know what you mean, but overall its very good. On the board there is flowers carved on them. I ventured into my room, with the sunshine streaming in. Good description Bree. Yes it definately is the best bedroom in the house and yes we are all jealous!!!! I can count around 30 pieces of paper, old, stray certificates, none used or cared for. The storage is great because it is hidden away above my wardrobe, which is built into the wall, although most of my stuff goes under the bed. Your punctuation is really good, but you are missing a few commas and had some capital letters missing. Under both of those beds there are fold out trundlers made for if i want more people in my room so in total i can have a staggering four people in my room! Your writing is very descriptive. Decorations fill the room with topics, happiness, colours and hobbies. Good description Annie. Next to my desk is a black and white Beanbag chair where I sit when Im either reading or watching Netflix. If you go into My room you will probably think it's really big and very messy, and the first thing you will see is the pink wallpaper and the rips and sellotape on the walls. You needed to double check your punctuation and spelling as there are quite a few mistakes when it comes to these areas. I would give you a rubric R4 mark. Or, it is a metaphor that could be used if you have just cooked a big messy meal and turned around to see that there is flour and vegetable scraps and plates and bowls all over the counter. The blankets on my bed are very colourful there is a bright red, white and grey striped blanket, a soft pink one and a plain white one. Some of its correct. the room was smelly like dirty socks. But i have to admit I have a wonderful cleaner to clean my room but the way I left it was the day before the cleaner comes round. All over the wall on one side are posters of things I like such as rugby posters and some flags. Their curtains black out light, their chairs all face the television, theres surround sound speakers, and of course theres an enormous flat screen TV on the wall! It is sunny and bright, and shows off my disposition. WILL HS BEDROOM At the foot of my bed there is a built in wardrobe with lots of clothes and at the foot of my sisters bed theres the entrance to the room and the door to the en suite. It's the worst having such a messy bedroom. My bedroom looks, smells and feels great. The layout of my medium-sized hideout is spacious, and being L shaped, it permits a reasonably large area to dance crazily around, spend quality time with friends or complete therapeutic craft activities. The spelling and Grammar was good and no spelling mistakes but you could use some more descriptive words. Sometimes when it's really cold i'll have my soft red blanket as well. But this is a bad thing for me because my bed is as you know against a window which means freezing water goes into my covers at night. My light blue/turquoise duvet has a really soft and warm feeling to it. I loved the way you described your bedroom at the start, I had a good visualization of what your room looked like. We have a old square tv holder thingy that I used to swing on until I put a hole in the wall, its still there. I have this there because well I play games alot. In the middle of my room up against the feature wall is my bed, its a Queen Double, with white outlines of hexagons and a grey background for my duvet and pillows. I think you have used some good verbs to describe your room and it has lots of information. I have many colours in my room. I have to share my room with two other people and its kind of small in width. What Type Of Muzzleloading Firearm Is The Most Popular And Most Commonly Used Among Hunters Today? I would say that the overall style of my bedroom is light and modern. My wardrobe is a double sliding door with a grey color. My room is a square room and is medium sized, I am lucky enough that I have it all to myself. Personally . next time leave out the details about the dust! Love Mum x. DOOGIES BEDROOM People are sliding down the stairs, someone has a toy train set out, and someone else is playing with dolls on the front step. I LOVE THE DETAILED DESCRIPTION OF THE THINGS YOU CAN SEE OUT YOUR WINDOW. My king single bed is jammed in the right hand corner with my beside table just beside it and underneath my window. It is my favourite part of my house because I can do what I like in there, and yet not get disturbed. A metaphor is a word or phrase that is used to make a comparison between two things. There are green curtains in my room that catch your eyes. These are 5 words you would use to describe my bedroom. A metaphor for home explains your feelings about your home by using figurative language. My next topic is my rooms cleanliness. Skateboards are propped up against the plain back wall next to my bed. So in conclusion i have told you about the 4 main points of my bedroom and hope you have got a good understanding of my bedroom. I have got posters on all the walls in my room and they almost cover up my well one of my walls. Very poor punctuation and vocabulary, sometimes it was very hard to follow what you where saying. Thorntons Bedroom Description Overall, I am very happy with my room and love the colour scheme that I have. So overall your writing is amazing. This seems to be a fair reflection of your bedroom. Lastly, my favorite item in my room would be my lovely old fashioned jewelry box. It is mostly a cool breeze that feels like the ocean air. I like my room the way it is because I love the view and how it is laid out. You might use this metaphor if your brother and sister just argued all day long. You need to think about what home feels like to you. The style of my room is perfect. I love the colour scheme in my bedroom as turquoise blue is one of favourite colours. My room isnt colourful. Firstly, in my opinion I think that this bedroom is the best for my kind of personality. I don't know how they got there. They also allow a lot of sunshine to come in, no matter what the season. The soft and wooly ground. So when you walk into my room on your right will be my bed facing you with a bedside table for my books, clock and a light for reading. Jackson 2x4 Auto Darkening Lens, I have always enjoyed my bedroom as describes the character of me, as it being a part of my life, it describes the aspects of what I like such as colours, patterns, decoration and the bedroom layout. Every morning I need to make sure my bed is neat and tidy. Three quarters of my room is engulfed in clothes and mess. There are also some capital letters that are in the wrong place. And my tall and thin window opposite the door as you come in which is my main source of light in the day. I have the white bedside table right next to my bed because well i need something to put my drink on, and I think that's the same for my sister. You might walk in and say, Why is my home a Christmas tree? September 2014. The size is a king single. I like how you described your mum telling you to clean your room all the time haha. It was an excellent piece of writing. I also have two Japanese swords in my room and one of them are a full size katana and makes my room feel like i'm safe if anyone tries to break in. Out my window you can see a stand of poplars, some five finger leaf trees and a beige orange rhododendron (type of flower). Quite a few good words but a lot of bland words in your writing making it a bit boring. Well writen Eddie I couldnt find any mistakes the only thing that I really noticed was the paragraphs are a bit short. But there are some things that I would really like to change like my bed would be better if it was double size and maybe a little bit of colour on my walls would make it much better. Senses are all over the show when it comes to my room. JAMES BEDROOM I have a small sized mat black H stuck to my wall with a pattern of turquoise and white dots and black and white dot bunting underneath. But there are disadvantages to having a small room. Underneath by clip board I have small shapes of watermelon bunting. My bedroom is exactly the way I like it and can tell you a story about my personality, if you read on you will know about my personality and go for a virtual journey through my bedroom. When I walk into my bedroom I always love that feeling when it is so so warm that you just lay there and forget about everything. 4. as bright as a day. Soft light brown that's how I describe my carpet it is really soft to walk on and gives you that welcome feeling. The smell isn't actually to bad because I can open some huge, one meter high windows and blow out the stinky odours. The lamp rests on a stack of six books that are all ever so slightly faded because of the direct sunlight that streams in all day long through the window. The vocobulary is very good aswell. Try next time to make some of your objects more descriptive and not just the colours. I dont ever think of changing my carpet but if I was then I would just throw heaps of pillows down onto my floor, that would be very comfy. You could visualize your whole room.The furniture paragraph is very good. I have a window that covers the whole wall so you can see outside. However your vocabulary could still improve to help the readers to have a clearer picture of what your bedroom looks like. Great detail in your paragraphs Jessie. This results in territorial disputes, arguments over who turns off the light at bedtime, and, worst of all, extreme mess. To the right of my bed is my bedside table, then my desk and finally my drawers. In my wardrobe I have shelves for my books and drawers for all my clothes. The first thing about the layout in my room you notice is the large curtains covering the windows at the back and at the left of my room. there is a tree outside my bedroom window. On the far side of my room is an old desk that needs getting rid of because all it does is collect dust. Its normally just a mucked up pile of sheets and she is always nagging me to make my bed and or clean my room. But on the other hand you could of give more ideas and elaborate more on the topic and it would be a better description. I have to balance on my chair and Sams shelf to reach my dictionary! So, a swamp is a perfect place for them to live. When you walk into my room youll see my bed in the far right corner. My most special object in my room is my tiger picture above my bed. With boxes on top and a big space where it looks with one box is missing. This was very well edited so there is not to much to say you have done a very good job with very little mistakes. In fact I love my bedroom it is the best. Some of the punctuation was a little muddled some of the I's were not where they needed to be and in between the full stops and the next sentence there were no spaces. (Her eyes were beautiful.) Spot on Dylan, explained your bedroom very well. You might say that your home is a workplace or an office if you or your parents seem to always be working from home. I usually put the feathered ones at the bottom and the cotton ones on the top. This is why my bedroom is the best place in the house. cock is like. Then theres my laundry basket that is white with lots of clothes in it. I hope you have had a virtual journey of what my bedroom looks like, have been taken through a story of my bedroom and know why I like my bedroom. Just remember we are moving your room soon. Next to that there is 2 shelfs about 1 meter long one is 30 centimeters higher than the other the bottom one is black and the top one is white and on top is legos that I built when I was young. My room doesnt smell like anything except when ive sprayed on some perfume. There are many spaces of my room everything from cloths on the draws and my bed in the corner. The colours in my room are quite dark. My black guitar leans up against my drawers and on top of my drawers there is an orange word that says Brave. On my desk there lies a golden skull candle. 3-. I have a ps3 sitting in my room waiting for me to get my t.v put in which will be a samsung t.v. It is placed next to my bed and upon it is a long, skinny lamp with pink polka dots on it. Nice work Kaia! Here, theyre using comparison (that a vault is hard to get into, just like the home), but instead of saying like a vault, theyre saying is a vault, for literary effect. Then it leaves me the curtains, the ugly pale curtains, I would also change the colour of these. Around the corner from my desk there is a window bay couch that is navy blue, across from the couch there is my Aqua chair covered in rugs and pillows. There is a famous song with the line Home is wherever Im with you. My bedroom The grey carpet is soft and oddly soothing underfoot. Her eyes were diamonds. On one of the walls, near the corner is a little round painting of a light blue owl from my hometown Raglan along with another small, colourful painting of the words I love you. Before long, the divide between work and home is blurred, and you can even metaphorically call your home a workplace because they appear so similar. Its plywood walls and lumpy concrete floor give it a rugged and unique feel. My wardrobe layout has all my shoes which i only have two pairs, hanging up are all my nice clothes. I love my room and I always will but it does have some bad thing about It but I still love it. The bed is positioned next to a wall-sized sliding door. You would see all my clothes on my floor if you walked up stairs and all the undies on the floor could date back a month. My room smells inviting, it's like strawberries mixed with flowers (which smells good). The Ideas are relevant but I would like to see more elaborated Ideas in the text. Overall it's ok but you repeat your facts. Soft grey carpet pushing through my feet. I love this painting because of the colours and the way the artist has paid attention to detail. I think Hannah's story had lots of descriptive words and had good punctuation and spelling. Floor, Where is it?, Under the bed, in my wardrobe. In my room there are lots of things to use like bop it and stuff like that. Maybe next time don't use 'my' too much. Then your eyes are carried to my dark coloured wooden dresser underneath the back window to the left. I use my bedroom to sleep, relax and sometimes do my homework. Bed, Desk Drawers and bean bag are most of the furniture in the room, the double bed's too big for the room the there is the desk the desk is big wooden and has my docking station and all of my accessories on it, then there is the beanbag the bean bag is lodged in between he bed and the desk it doesn't get used much i only really put my school bag on it but i still think that it's a cool thing to have in the room. 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